2010-06-12 [Eyonic]: :O goma so pervy
The over-shirt mildly confuses me, doesn't seem to quite fit the right way *head tilt*

2010-06-12 [Goma]: it was a pain to draw x///x

2010-06-12 [Eyonic]: I hates drawing clothing XD it's so annoying and gets in the way

2010-06-12 [Goma]: x.x not what I meant but ok o,o just that specific instance my friend

2010-06-12 [arthemis_]: The shirt looks attached to the bra at one side, and not attached at the other side. I think that the right side of the shirt (left if you look at it), should go round the bra, if you know what I mean...
Coloring could use some work, but I know how hard it is to scan pencil colored work! So, probably the original is so much nicer.
Socks are adorable, pose is adorable, the belly button may be a bit lower and the thighs are seemingly uneven.
I've not seen other work from you, so I cannot compare. But total picture I'd give it a 7/10 :)

2010-06-12 [Pnelma Tirian]: the foot and ankle don't look like they line up. Nice job with the colors. That red is pretty vibrant. :D

2010-06-12 [Goma]: wonderful critique Arthemis xD I agree full well about the shirt I feel I messed it up x.x if you'd like you can peruse through my deviantart but most of my work is nothing like this.

2010-06-13 [pegasus1000]: The proportions are just bothering me. The upper part of the arm should be thicker then the lower. The waist should be wider (but that is probably the style you wanted.) The parts I like the best are the hands and the eyes. Keep working on it.

2010-06-13 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: Nice, but like the above comments, I'd have to say the proportions are definitly off.

2010-06-13 [arthemis_]: I've looked at your other art-work, and I see that you are better with the male form :) Which is curious, because I myself are far better with the female form then the male-form.

2010-06-13 [Goma]: I've always had my own personal characters being male(for the most part anyway *glances at Kuro*) and so the female form is a bit distant in my art but I'm getting there.

2010-06-15 [Falx]: First thing I noticed was that it seems like her shirt is stufffed under her one breast. To me, it should drape more over it. Question: Is the shirt supposed to be more like a regular "I'm wearing this out" shirt, or more like lingerie? If it's the second, I think it should be a little less opaque. I love the look on her face and I like how you captured that blush like, "I'm being naughty and I know it." An art major friend of mine and I had this discussion on the human form and she said that she found that artists tend to have an easier time drawing figures of the same gender that they are. I guess because it's what you see in the mirror every day. So, I'm going to say for not drawing the female form very often, this is honestly pretty good. ^_^

2010-06-26 [Chel.]: The face is very nice, I just wish she wasn't so oddly cropped. I'm confused as to where the left leg is(our left).

2010-06-28 [Goma]: I started and wound up getting too far so I couldn't fit her all on the paper so I'm honestly just as curious Chel o.o